Then the story did a "six months later" jump that I didn't get the point of. I really enjoyed reading about the main characters and how Sophie came to be with them. The age play was interesting and surprisingly HAWT at times. Review 2: Captivated by the first half, not so much by the second. more grammar, but otherewise nothing major I think.Surprisingly good book though. And then the circumstances of the situation once Sophie is introduced to the household warrants a lot of details I think, and not a 5 months timeskip.There's a little to be said about spelling and. It really wouldn't have hurt if it was 150 pages longer, simply because you're dealing with 4 characters that are all interesting to learn about, and who all go through some fairly insane character development. Even though she's 18 she often ends up behaving like a small child, and you can kind of grasp why. It makes Sophie's actions seem plausible, however arbitrary they may appear at first. Review 1: A bit out of my comfort zone, and my comfort zone tends to be perverted stuff to begin with!It covers the whole baby/child thing quite cleverly though.
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